Wednesday, September 15, 2010

बन्द कोठा

भातभुङ बिपना
च्यतिएका रहर
सिद्धिएका आसा
चुधिएको बन्धन
बन्द कोठा भित्र
थुनिएको अबोध भविस्य
सब्का लागि कथा बनेको
सपना
बिपना
रहर
आसा
बन्धन
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5 comments:

  1. this the first poem of mine in the face book. i created this while i was working at capital fm. it was one morning i was watching a tv show in avenues tv which had covered a story about a child.

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  2. charam nirasabadi kabita...yettiko kabi bata urjawan kabita aaye sabailai prerana milthiyo..kamtima niskarsa aasawadi banauda pani ramro hunchha....

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  3. जति नै निराशावादी भए पनि मलाई त यो कविता मन प¥यो । यथार्थ परिस्थिति नै त्यस्तो रहेछ त, कसरी कविता आशावादी बनोस् । सकारात्मक पृष्ठभूमिमा त सकारात्मक र आशावादी कविता पनि लेखिएकै छ नि, होइन त रुबिना दिदी ?

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  4. diwaker you are right ...tyo news story nai testai thyo..euta sano bachhalai kothama thunera rakeko thyo ani yo kabita bahira niskyo so aasaabadi banera lekhne thau nai paina..anyways thanks for the comment madhu dai..

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